Noon in Bethleém’s cave:
light dispels misty chill
illuminating the ancient altar of our ancestors’ worship.
Walls remember
pilgrims awaiting sun’s rebirth
parfait-achieving Cathars
holy grail carriers.
To think she’d rested here
on the shortest most glorious day of the year.
photo credit: grillou.com
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And what a glorious day it is! Very beautiful!
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Gorgeous imagery and sentiment. I’ll ‘fess up that I had to google parfait-achieving Cathars but I’m glad I did as it is part of French history that I know little about. Plus, I like learning new things! A creative response to the prompt.
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‘pilgrims awaiting sun’s rebirth’ is a wonderful image for this piece.
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Very evocative. I like your words. Nice job!
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Thank you so much.
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Such a lovely, mystical feel to this…winter solstice, caves…so evocative.
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Thanks so much for the sweet comment! It seems a very mystical place. I’d love to rest myself there someday =)
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I love the line “Holy Grail Carriers,” and it’s great that you used the prompt to pay tribute to the winter solstice.
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Thanks so much! A bit off season, but I’ve been wanting to write about this cave for a while and it was the first thought I had in response to the prompt. Thanks for stopping by and commenting!
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Oh, those crazy perfectionistic Cathars. Wow! I didn’t expect to be taken back to the Middle Ages. Enjoyed the mysticism in the language. I’m educatedly guessing that the ‘she’ in this poem is Joan of Arc, yes?
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Ding ding ding! But don’t quote me on Joan actually ever being here other than in my mind. It just seemed like her kind of a place. =)
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You create a great mood of history and reverence in this piece. Enjoyed this a lot.
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You’re very kind. It’s intriguing that so many throughout history have found it so mystical. It’s hard not to get drawn in. Thank you for stopping by!
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Gorgeous imagery, mixed in with a bit of religious fervor. As brilliant as the sun!
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Thank you for your warm compliment. =)
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