Haiku (or Senryū ?) 3

She dotted her eyes
And crossed her tease for you.
Mind your pleas, and queue.

According to Wikipedia,

“Senryū  tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū  are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious.”

I think I prefer senryū.

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